Hi Bloggers
This week we have been doing work on narratives. We had a slide that told us on how to make our own narratives. We used morphed animals as our main characters. I had three main characters a griffin, Pegodog and a dragodile. Some of you will know the griffin from harry potter and I made the other 2 up.
Here is the narrative that I wrote.
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Kia Orana Daiki. You have written an interesting fantasy with twists and turns right up to the end. Well done. Your ending gives tension because we don’t know what’s going to happen to you.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you could link your narrative to your blog as it’s quite difficult to read with 3-4 words on each line. Good to see you have paragraphs. Always remember to proof read and describe your setting so we can see your characters in action. They are very creative and bold. Keep up your awesome mahi, Daiki. Have a wonderful weekend.